pink and white petals
hang loosely by your last name
my epitaph stirs
Author notes
inspired loosely by Last Flowers by Radiohead
A contest entry
- PERFECT FLOWER HAIKU by Swan song.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh, i really like this...congrats on your trophy!!
good luck
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good write, interesting. I think i would like to feel it more.
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great poem very strong
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thank you for entering! this is a powerful poem! and a wonderful haiku! you did a great job and good luck in the contest
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Now this is sadly deep and one hell of a haiku Very very deep well done!!!!!!!
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