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Pure Gold

Melting pot

  of sorrow,

        wring tears

            of pure

                unadulterated Gold

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  • Aun Ali
    May 18, 2008
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    Great Art

    So short, so beautiful...Amazing.


  • notorious
    May 18, 2008

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    Some great imagery here I could actually visualize in my mind...Words like 'melting' and the 'pure' just work in your favor.

    "wring tears of pure unadulterated Gold"
    My favorite line--stays with you after reading it (and rereading it!)

    A great choice of 10 words that suit the prompt!