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the party's over

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I'll cry into your shallow teacup
before your fire burns...

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Prompt ~ Dragon Tears
http://artissima.deviantart.com/art/Dragon-s-Tear-49829242

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Wow.. aww... so sad, powerful imagery in a few words! Well deserved Gold!


  • notorious gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    The party definitely sounds over with this piece...incredibly sad but poetic and simple at the same time...nicely done here. I can't believe you expressed so much in just 10 words!! Its impact is much greater..

    "before your fire burns" My favorite of the 2 gorgeously-stated lines..

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    Since you chose to display the picture, please credit the artist with the following link:

    http://artissima.deviantart.com/art/Dragon-s-Tear-49829242

    Oh yes, and 'teacup' is one word. =]

    Please change these things..

    Thanks for your entry!


  • Weltt
    May 18, 2008
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    As always another beautiful write from you. Best of luck in the contest. Well Done!!