Rewards
of life withered away,
stealing the breath
of time!
Author notes
Niecey wanted 10 words and thats what she got.
I love you hon.
A contest entry
- 10 words. PIF by delightfulmess.
550 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sometimes I read your work and I wish I had thought of what you just penned. This is fantastic! You may have been restricted to ten words but that's all you needed, any more would be too many.
Love,
Amera
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powerful and deeply persomal. In just so few years. Great writing
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This is amazing with so few words its discription gives the reader its exact meaning excellent best wishes always love Brian XXX
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This is beautifully done honey, very deep for such a short write. I really like it. Love you baby...Scott
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Ooooh this is very profound and powerful.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Powerful Words.
You always express yourself well,
in 10 words, or ten lines.. You get your point acrossed.
Thanks for sharing, much love and light Victorious!
I love ya sweet soul.
-Timothy
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