An awaited kiss
fulfilling their
inner most desire's,
finally together...
Author notes
Just right 10 wonderful words
A contest entry
- 10 words. PIF by delightfulmess.
550 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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worthy of so much more
tender and loving.
congrats on bronze
ooxoxo
Tory
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Congratulations on the bronze. It was well deserved.
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beautiful, passionate, and sensual...congrats to you on the bronze. For being 10 words you left quite a picture in the readers mind
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Wowzers~~
This piece scorched the screen...
Oh My Eyes
Ten words of Magic to entice the reader~
Beautifully done Tony
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Keep that quill dancing~~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Perfect
A little poem penned perfectly for the picture. Good luck in the contest
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And a trophy should be here. This is one of my favorite films of all time. I cannot help but feel good when I read these words and view this image. Nicely done. ~Pamela
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Great message in few words. Congratulations on the Bronze.
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Ah, congratulations on the bronze. You have written a beautiful 10 meaningful words here. Very nicely done.
Kelli
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Strong emo in such a short poem, well done.
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This is beautiful congrats on your bronze best wishes and much love always
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thats wicked cool, theres a lot of meaning for such a short write. congrats!
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Nice.... That is one of my favorite all time movies.
You did real good here.
thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Nice imagery. Stirs memories for me. Good luck
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beautiful.
most beautiful movie
Thankyou for your sweet words to my poem. It made me smile in a day where there isnt much to smile about.
xx
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