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Hanging on to the hope of you

I remember as a girl standing in the sea of tranquility
Young, healthy, the sun dancing in the waves
My skin absorbing its warmth
No sign of a disability

Gods wonderful creation was designed so perfect
His creatures on earth, without a flaw
Man and woman united as one
Beautiful, ageless, tall and erect

How cruel was man to destroy a perfect world
Ill health pervades us
Blind, deaf, sickness, dying
Limbs stiff, foetuses unfurled

I'm hanging in dear God to that hope in you
Wherein the bible tells us of that promise
That death will be no more, all imperfections gone
Revelation's words so true

I thank you heavenly father, for the gift of love
Although, my old bones ache, my heart not strong
I can still feel wonderful emotions for my fellowman
This being given by you, with love from above


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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    May 31

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    Beautiful and moving to the heart.
    Thanks a lot for your entry here
    and good luck to you with it!
    Also, welcome to our group! I hope
    that you find this a fun and worthwhile
    place to be. Take care and thanks a lot
    for entering this contest!




    Jeremy0826
  • A warm welcome to our group. If you need anything please message me. I think you will find our loving family to be warm, kind and supportive. All the best,


    Karen co-owner of the group.

  • tawk gold member
    May 19

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    Yes our Father is always with us even when we don't think he is. Thanks for this beautiful and inspirational write. Without hope and faith where would we all be? Good luck in the contest. Theresa, Karen is right you need to be a member to be in the contest, why not join if you have not already, you will love it here here is the link again

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/People%20with%20Disabilities

  • Yes, His love is within us always. It is intended to be a perfect world, and it will be restored one day. You are right to hold onto that promise. That is so beautiful. I just love your poem. It really stirred my emotions. What a sweet thing faith is; sometimes it is all we have to hang onto. Blessings, Karen

    In order to stay in the contest, you need to be a member of the group. You are welcome to join us; we would love to have you. Here is the link; http://allpoetry.com/group/show/People%20with%20Disabilities