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"She Can Fly"

In a heart of gold, many secrets are kept untold.
At night she dreams..dreams she can fly.
Sifts through the midnight sky.
Her soul is untouched as she dreams a thousand dreams.
No one can take away from what she believes.

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  • LionessK silver member
    May 29, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Very nice job with this. Few words can say so much. I think your message is clear, you've said everything that was needed to get your point across, and you did so in poetic form quite well. I hope you will keep writing and sharing your words here with us all.


    ~Kristy


  • Blackwinged Angel
    May 17, 2008

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    WOW

    I love it! Absolutly love it, a great peom indeed. I hope to see many, many more of your poems. For you are very talented.