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Pond

pond spews slimy life
verdant algae planet green
a frog croaks with joy

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  • thepoetssoul gold member
    May 19

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    I love this 5-7-5 haiku done with splendid colour and tasteIf we were all frogs we would all be croaingThank you for this wonderful poem in true formBest of wishes to you

    Tony

  • ian sawicki silver member
    May 18

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    i am thinking the pond signifies the oceans in eyes, the tears that flow with joy or sorrow at times, and the slimy life is perhaps sleep stuck in the eyes that stops us seeing properly. the second line makes me think this is true with planet green, that green in our eyes makes us feel blue sometimes and the planet is green and blue. a frog i think signifies waking up again, a frog in the throat, when we first wake up we need a cup of tea/coffee. that it my interpretation, unless it is really about going to the moon for some cheese for that was the other thought that came to me after reading this splendid piece.