Ravishing

Claret petals mount
in Winter's chaotic locks
aiding lovers gaze

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Perfect flower-Traditional Haiku

PERFECT FLOWER HAIKU by Swan song. 600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 14 entries
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Re-invention
June 21, 2008
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well Im not a fan of short poems but this is great.. good job!
Intricate Wordsmith
May 28, 2008
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Good luck in my contest.
Swan song
May 18, 2008
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Beautiful wording loved this one
OurxBeginning
May 18, 2008

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Wonderful job on this. I agree, a nice choice of words that you used. Nice work and thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest.
crimsondew
May 17, 2008
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oH! this is beautiful..lovely choice of words here..All the best to you too!