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As the mind so are we

Missing image
big bang set explosion
tore apart tight mass,
pieces scattered in infinite space
time traveling like arrow

infinite is measure
human mind can not fathom,
a tiny part
can not grasp whole

conditioned thinking
limits its power,
self centered
draws circle around it

when self explodes
frontiers break,
merges one with universe
without measure

mind limits men,
tiny bubble in self
vast ocean without it



Author notes

As the mind so the man,when conditioned it draws boundaries within which it functions.Without centre mind becomes infinite

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  • Kari gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    This was a really thought provoking piece.
    Thanks for your entry

    Kari


  • Lexie
    May 26, 2008

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    this poem painted a beautiful image in my head that our school books just make so boring. lol. good poem


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    I am so glad you have won gold for this. I have commented before but thought I would again, for now you have a wonderful gold trophy. Well done my friend, you really deserve it.


  • islekine gold member
    May 25, 2008
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    Way to go!!!

    Congrats on the Gold!
    Write on.
    *PEACE*


  • crimsondew
    May 25, 2008

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    Wow

    self centered
    draws circle around it

    mind limits men,
    tiny bubble in self
    vast ocean without it

    Stunning imagery brother...Congrats on teh gold! So well deserving!


  • Arkbear gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    Holy Cow!

    This has got to be one of the best writes I have read in a long time ~

     

    There is so much to contemplate within your thoughts......I can not critique something this nice ~

     

    I can tell you are a Poet of great wisdom.....I always enjoy your work ~

     

    I hope each Poet in *Beautiful Minds, Dark Addictions* gets to read this entry.....superb penning ~

     

    Best of luck to you,

     

    Bear ~


  • aboomer silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    I agree with 'islekine' - LOVE the quantum thoughts traveling through this write!
    Love your wording! And all so true - our minds do limit us, draw boundaries, hold us back at times. And when we let go, we can sometimes soar high.
    Great wording!!
    best wishes in your contest.


  • islekine gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    This is really deep....

    Fantastic "quantum thoughts"....best wishes in the contest!
    Write on.
    *PEACE*

  • Barely Breathing gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    This is such a great poem and really gets the reader thinking. My favourite part was "self centered / draws circle around it". This is such a great line and so true. Well done and all the best for the contest.

  • Lexie
    May 17, 2008
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    Good poem i like the part
    "infinite is measure
    human mind can not fathom
    a tiny part
    can not grasp whole"

    the most for that part stood out to me and it is the line i remember most from the whole poem. good job

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