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Death And Harbour Goodbyes

Blackened,
     tunnels spy out to sea

Onyx waves,
     ripple,
          clanging buoy bells

dagger,
     prance between fingers,
          pointed, like talon

penetrating,
     beneath royalty's fabric,
          cavity spread... as if curtains

silk,
     crimson drenched, stained,
          ripped, waddled.. then pursed

She bids husband...

          farewell

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




 

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  • DarkHunter
    June 4, 2008
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    Powerful wording and imagery you have created. Thanks for entering.


  • Ithica silver member
    May 21, 2008
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    You do create some very visual poetry... No exception here!!! Well done!!!


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 18, 2008

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    Brilliant words, another individual take on the picture that drew me in so well


    Thank you and good luck


    Cindy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Stunning write! I love your imagery! As always, your pen has not let you down.. wonderful write


  • Angelflower
    May 18, 2008

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    Oh.. well I'm out..lol.. you did a wonderful job... you really brought that picture to life! I love this.. Great write.. And best of luck..

    Angel


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    This ship sails outward yet still visible

    translation:
    me likey


  • Cannonsfire
    May 17, 2008
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    Well done and good luck. Love, C

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