Brittle ice surrounds
My cage,
My beauty
Is really a shade.
I let my dreams coast
On the waters of the world
Seeking my chance
To break free
From my hidden
Beauties
Misery
Author notes
10 poets.
CREDIT THE PICTURES OWNER-----Dreams_Of_Reality_by_Otravituss.
write between 15 to 40 words....within HALF an HOUR....
A contest entry
- Quickie.................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
650 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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incredible image both in photo and in words,
if we could all break free from hidden beauties, let them explode outward in a pyrotechnic display, so that all could ooo and ahh, much like you have done here. Superb work~~Artis
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Wow! Those words give an otherwise weird picture life.
I wouldn't be moved by that picture at all without the words. Very Nice.
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I hope she does break free
wonderful take darl...feeling the coldness, the angst at wanting the freedom.
Well done, thank you and good luck
Cindy
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wow this is awesome... great job here.... u amaze me... love ya sis... hugs.... goood luck in this contest.... you did wonderful in my eyes....
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taiinfinite
great take on the prompt,i let my dreams coast on the waters of the world, love these lines
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This is such a well penned and beautiful darkness. I loved the flow and message penned here. An enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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This is wonderful sis!! Being caged is a horrible thing.. I know... this is beautiful and sad!
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Softly sad but beautifully done. Love, C
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you like this.. I really got a blank when I saw the picture..
again, thank you..
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