loophole not frayed noose coil
spreads as stretched portal
to circumvent reality sober
faithful departure of derelict sky
delivers clever theologies
straight from insanity's scriptures
to strengthen aspirations to abide
Author notes
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Dreams_Of_Reality_by_Otravituss.
A contest entry
- Quickie.................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
650 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sheesh you were on a ball this weekend weren't ya? silvers, bronzes, golds, hms ... very good weekend for you!
lol ... is there a touch on religion I see there?!
congrats on the gold
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Wonderful take on the prompt. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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Wahoo... fantastic!! "insanity's scriptures" I know them well!!! lol
Good luck bro.. this is awesome!
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Very deep.
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oh brilliance...you take my picture prompt and run with it everytime.
I quite like the uplifting feeling behind faithful departure of derelict sky.
Thank you so much, a great write here
Good luck
Cindy
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