Every time I ask the question as you stare...
Simple words of how, when and where...
You say the same thing which I can't bear.
I ask you if you wish to be with me...
And the only answer you go on giving...
Is simply, "Maybe, maybe, maybe".
As this way time keeps passing...
While I calmly try guessing...
At the same time desperately waiting.
You're wasting your very time...
Thinking instead of just being mine...
If you refuse my love it would be a crime.
For what you most desire until what day...
The same answer you will stop to say...
I don't understand why won't you stay.
So life goes on very silently...
While my heart for you goes on screaming...
And there you go on repeating...
"Maybe, maybe, maybe".
Maybe they do love you but too shy to let you know.
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Wonderful
I wish that someone would look at me and say i want you to be mine. If i truely loved them and wanted them i would never say maybe but then again i only say maybe to small things like (can we get cell phones) lol again you are my amazing writer. keep going.
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So how about you beng mine?!
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i can understand this completly
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I think everyone has had the word "Maybe" thrown at them by someone they like... One can either wait, or move on!
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the word maybe should be banned from circumstances like this... it gives a hope that can crush, an uncertainty that keeps me holding on...
so many have been in this situation... being the one that waits, as breathing shallows and almost becomes a holding of the breath... just to hear the simple word that may not be so simple after all... YES!
another wonderful read
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Thanks for the comment and the help hun!
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maybe, maybe, maybe....its beautiful! It flowed very well together and made it a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing!
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Always a joy to have you around dear!
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This is a really really nice poem. It touched the raw emotions that pai...are inside me. Very well done. I too myself wonder this when my mind is wandering.
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Thanks you Silver, I'm glad you like!
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I wonder about this too. Understand. Just too tired to comment more, but Thanks.
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I still love you little princess.
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This maybe be cliché but I can really relate to what you have written here. I am sorry you are feeling this way though and that you know this kind of pain. Hopefully the person this was written about/for will realise that you love them before it is too late [if it isn't too late already]
Keep up the amazing work, my friend!
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*LOL!*
Your comments are very grand to me. But I dont base my poems on reality. It all comes from my imagination!
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Wow.
You have one hell of an imagination then!
I applaud you on that, my friend.
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My imagination played best in the creation of 2 of my poems which are:
A Piano And Me
Imagine
My imagination blow everything away on those poems!
Kick @$$!
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