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Sea of dreams

Missing image

 

 

 

The salt water ~


my perfume
upon obsessive skin

with that certain scent
of something
I still can't understand

So I sail away
~untouched~

Author notes

picture ~ Dreams_Of_Reality_by_Otravituss.

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  • tainfinite
    May 18, 2008
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    taiinfinite

    so sad to sail away untouched all that expectansy left unquenched. well done


  • In Too Deep1
    May 18, 2008
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    A very intriguing and unique take on the prompt. Beautiful read. Best wishes in the comp


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Beautiful piece hun!! "obsessive skin".. ooo love that!! Sigh.. to sail away untouched tho....


  • Cannonsfire
    May 17, 2008
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    Lovely Love, C


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 17, 2008

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    Upon obsessive skin...I like those words, strong..

    I enjoyed this whole piece, a great take on the picture thank you so much and good luck


    Cindy

  • OurxBeginning
    May 17, 2008

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    I liked the picture of this. I'll have to come back and see the piece once you're finished. Good luck to you.

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