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Within quiet worlds

Missing image

 

 

 

 

Nature's secret of patience
whispers to my soul
humming lullabies
beneath a sheltered breast

and the earth delights
to feel the lasting depth of my bare feet

touching her...

 

 

 

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Prompt ~ Beautiful Peace

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  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    May 23, 2008

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    Hello Lavender Butterfly. You have created a very loving Gaia; and the "earth delights", very expressive. Good job. Regards.


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    --is touched-- what magnificent word art! Its peacefull beautiful, as I requested. Wow thanks so much and best of luck to you!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Sigh... isn't nature just so peaceful.. this lifted my spirits today!!

    Sigh..


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    Especially liked the communion with earth, the sharing of delights expressed here.
    Marlene

  • OurxBeginning
    May 18, 2008

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    I agree, a cute poem. Loved the photo, and your words are unique. I hope you do well in the contest, nice work.


  • eternalsol
    May 17, 2008
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    this is a cute poem nice

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