What started out
As friendship
Was to be ended
With a full stop
By your piercing words
Laughter we shared
V a n I s h e d
Pictures we took
With blinding smiles
T o r n – a p a r t
Promises made
To be cherished always
B r o k e n
A flame,
Lit by your hurtful words
Still burn
And will be
Forever burning
~
Author notes
Option 2: forever burning
A contest entry
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Comments
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sigh...i ruined a friendship...and this is pretty much what it sounds like.
seems like you know me all too well -
I hate to hear a story like this one. I love the poem though. It si very good.
but it always really hurts to loose a best friend after having so many memories made togother
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