She sits,
beautiful and elegant,
magnificent, so it appears.
The sea splashes beneath her...
So perfect a scene.
Yet these looks may be deceptive,
as her eyes,
tell of deep dark secrets...
One can only wonder what she hides.
Author notes
Pic prompt. Credit to: Dreams_Of_Reality_by_Otravituss.
40 words.
A contest entry
- Quickie.................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
650 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Congrats on the bronze!
I really like this, the end opens up to a world of mystery. Beautifully done, congrats on the bronze
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I like that it's thoughtful and well done. Happy trails
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Congrats to you too sis! Loved the intruige in this...
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I wonder I wonder, I do
Love this take on the pic....gave it the mystery the picture has
Thanks darl and good luck
Cin
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wow..!!!!!!!!!!1 im thinking winner lol.... you did awesome.... i like this... gooooooood luck in contest...
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Ooh.. such a tease!!! lol.. this is a really wonderful take.. Great job!!!
Best of luck..
Angel
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Ohhh... very mysterious and seductive sis!! Fantastic take on the prompt.. I adore it!!
xx
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I likes mysterious.
Nice.
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