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A Comforting Calm

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Beauty is laid upon the eyes

as the water splashes to Earth,

in such a radiant show of wonder

we are pleasured by life’s reward.

 

 

Running rapidly over the walls

the waters hug the rocks.

Coolest scent of freshness hits,

leaving a sense of serenity and peace.

 

 

As I watch in all its glory

the ongoing flow of passion;

Sun does shine brightly on the stream

leaving sparkling blessings to the eye.

 

 

Each motion dancing nicely

enjoying the twist, turns and falls.

Splashing hard, in rapid momentum,

waters blanket the nearby surroundings.

 

 

As we inhale the beauty before us

all emotions will subside.

For within the coolness of the waters

we find such a comforting calm.

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  • Amera gold member
    May 18

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    When the poem is more beautiful than the picture provided then we know it's good. This is lovely.

    Love,
    Amera


  • Griswold silver member
    May 18

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    Wonderfully done honey, and in free verse even!!! You put me right there with you. Love you honey. Scott

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    Much love, and all the best in the contest!
    Thanks for sharing, love reading you.

    -Timothy


  • Swan song gold member
    May 17
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    Now that is poetry I loved this one made my toes curl good luck