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In One Breath

Flowers open to catch your scent

The sky opens to shed your tears
The waters stand still to reflect you beauty

Your radiance shades the moon

The sun rises with your eyes awakening

Your laughter gives song to the seasons

Your touch gives essence to my being

Unfolding yourself to me
A dream held and given

The nectar of life, sharing


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  • Leila Greeters member
    May 18
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    Aww this is sweet, and beautiful. Thanks for entering x
  • Wonderful write. I loved the emotions in this and I can relate to it a lot. I liked the ending, wraps it up perfectly.

    • tainfinite
      May 17
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      taiinfinite

      wow thanks that was quick i was still editing the background lol thanks for the comment