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Simple To See

My feeling are in words,
So simple for you to see,
How difficult is it for you,
To understand what's me?!

I'm possibly a manic depressant,
And suicidal to boot,
But seriously dont you realise,
That it's not just me I want to shoot?!

And if Your reading this,
I do not want you dead,
Your fucking boyfriend however,
I would fill with fucking lead.

No wait, I wouldn't do that,
And not because I can't,
But because if you are happy,
Then plainly I just shan't.

I still love you very dearly,
That will never really change,
But after so much time,
I think it's rather strange.

So this is my final word,
To You I will say,
That if you asked me back,
Forever I would stay.

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  • SpydurPoet silver member
    May 25

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    Awwww. Beautiful poem, heartbreak makes for a great inspirational tool.
    Hope You're not seriously suidical.

    God bless.

    jessi

  • This is kind of sad, but I did enjoy it. Nicely done on your rhyming, very deep. The ending is deep and my favourite part, nice work.

    • Michael-B gold member
      May 18
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      Thanks alot. Looking at it now I'm actually amazed that there are no spelling or grammar mistakes and it flows alright, (I drank far too much last night then wrote this). Anyway thanks again for the comment.