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Yearning


Waters roar in consummation
of my mind
Flowing through my simple thoughts
not so very kind

Crash of all the waters
expressions of thought,
of all the immense powers
I have always sought





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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Oooh, wonderful write!! Best of luck


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 18, 2008
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    Thirty five wonderful words, friend, all goodlol

  • OurxBeginning
    May 17, 2008

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    Nice piece. It makes the reader think, and I liked the shortness of this. Kind of hopeful in a way, good luck in your contest.