[ spring time comes the gold ]

spring time comes the gold
wilting dandelion is here
in loving child's hand

A contest entry

PERFECT FLOWER HAIKU by Swan song. 600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 14 entries
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ecrivain01
May 18, 2008
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Perfect ...
as far as I can see.
- LarryATilander
  May 18, 2008
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  Thanks Jim.
  I've always liked the short forms.
Swan song
May 18, 2008
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I loved dadenlions when i was a kid and this brought back some good memories well done!
- LarryATilander
  May 18, 2008
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  Yeah,
  sometimes the memories rule.
OurxBeginning
May 18, 2008

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What a nice imagery. I like dandelions.. not too good on my allergies, but lol, I love nature. Nice description. Good luck.
- LarryATilander
  May 18, 2008
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  The buzz
  Is worth the snuzz..
- LarryATilander
  May 18, 2008
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  Thanks.
  It is actually a haiku adaptation of a poem of mine that has been kicking about a while called Springtime of My Soul.