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the scent of roses

the scent of roses
perfumes the night with delight
in my lovers hair

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    You even got a rhythm and rhyme with this hu well done second line is exceptionaly strong.


  • lady8
    May 17, 2008
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    Very romantic words for the way your lovers hair smells,lovely job.