Your puppet; come play.
Bind me {tease me}
pain
my
release
Pull…
We’re leaving this world,
We’re running away.
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In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/30 Quickie by LeilaJayne.
450 points, ended May 18, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am trying to understand how on runs away from intimacy and towards ecstasy... doesn't it seem a contradiction? This is excellently constructed.
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LMAO!!! You're so funny! Who said ecstasy has to be about intimacy???
And considering some of your writes.. you crack me up
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I wonder how you got that from my words here??
and thank you
Cindy
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Wow this is great sis!!! Gold in my books... I think I've been that puppet before!
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thanks sis..Got bronze,, lol. Happy with that, such an intriguing picture lol
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A very interesting piece!
best wishes in the contest! very interesting take on the prompt! I liked it!
~ James ~
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Thanx
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Oh i loved this!!! Great take, well written. Thanks for entering x
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Thanks darl great pic, great contest, thanx for the bronze
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A very interesting take on the prompt dear, great stuff, and best of luck.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Thanks Dad
Good to hear your thoughts, as always
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nice pearls 
haha.. good luck!
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everyone likes the pearls hehe
Thanx Jet
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Good luck sis! Ooooo pretty pearls!
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Thanx darl...abackgrounds by a new friend, won my quickie yesterdy or sumthing, childofthewild..she has a in a list for everyone to use..there all so pretty heheh
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