Oh God
something is wrong with my eyes
since you are omnipresent
and yet I cannot adjoin you
while she is not universal
however, I can behold her in all the substances
even when she is in the costume
It perceives that she is stark-naked
I determine me to affiliate with you
and you inspire me to associate with her
maybe, you intend me to exercise her resplendence
to betoken you
drilling the unclad assembly of her
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Romantic Poetry * picture inspired by ennovy.
700 points, ended June 27, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautifully Sensual. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended June 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh God
beautifully felt, your senses speak to her beautiful presense. Kiss her already!!! -
Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you for entering, and good luck in the contest.
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Very vivid vision of your dream lady, and your desires...Thank you for entering.....Novy & Brazos
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Prabhu my friend...
I must admit that this also put a huge smile on my face.
Thank you
Sol
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Ot takes a deeper appreciation to locate the sensual words you have penned here. And I must say, it is beautifully done. Excellent work.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
I kinda have to laugh at this one, I mean, "drilling the unclad assembly of her"...that gets right to the point now, doesn't it? Gotta admit, I almost blushed, but hey, it's only natural, right? Later, AG
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There is nothing wrong with your eyes.. ...or your sensual poetry...Well done. Good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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quite impressive
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Wonderful jobhere lol, and at this time I have to agree with paul it made me laugh.
Either or I wish you the best my dear.
Love
Passions
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LOL Well, I don't know if you intended for me to laugh but I sure am laughing up a storm here. You have a definite dense of humor PrabhuDayal!
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hey Paul, you made me smile. and gave me a chuckle too.
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