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Searching for my way out...

Eyes always open
L oo king
For the answers
I Can not find
Searching
To find my way out
Without hurting others

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20 words



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A contest entry

Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!

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  • Re-invention silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    love the way you pictured the picture with the write.. its amazing.. this one I adore... great one sis!


  • jasminerose
    May 17, 2008

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    This is a very touching piece and one I think many will relate with!
    Beautifully penned from the heart!
    All my best to you in the contest!!
    Linda


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Sigh.. I am looking for that way out without hurting others too... this hit me hard, as is very much my life right now...

    Excellent take


  • KayJay
    May 17, 2008
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    Well done... wonderfully gentle...
    Ken


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    May 17, 2008
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    Like the feeling of your emotion ... beautiful in its delicacy.

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