Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Perfection

Machinery behind the beauty of life
Each screw and dial
An essential part
To make life what it is
Perfect

Author notes

Meh?

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Viva La Revolution
    May 18, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    This is amazing. Nice job


  • KayJay
    May 17, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Wonderful sentiment, well penned. Nice response to the prompt... Well done.
    Ken


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Fascinating! I think we must look at all our 'machinery' and use that to become whole (as perfect as we can be in these imperfect bodies) and then we find beauty in life
    Excellent take


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    May 17, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Perfect in one's own eye ... heh

    Nice take.