Tinkering wink's
of expectations,
manifests thoughts
of unknowing propulsion,
as each flicker reflects envy
in the eye of the beholder
Author notes
20 words
prompt:http://budgie.deviantart.com/art/13oclock-85890774
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 Quickie... let's go people!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 17, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful take on the prompt....congrats on your shiny bling
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Thank you so much for the congratulations and the wonderful comment Rob
Linda
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Big pat on the back -well deserved Gold babe-powerful words here-great with the prompt.
Love Hilly xxx
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Thank you Hilly for the pat on the back
We can always use one of those Always a pleasure to hear from you
Linda
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Congratulations!!!
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Thank you for the congratulations
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Oh what drives the engine... Love this take.
Congrats on your Gold!
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Thanks
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Well written and color coded too! (LOL)... Nice take on the prompt!
Ken
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Wink's=winks
Should be changed as the wink doesn't belong to one sole person.
Love your vocabulary...e.g. tinkering (rarely see this adorable word), manifests, propulsion
A unique spin on "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" with the envy bit.
Great background, great write.
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Ah ... well, very nice imagery and message ... love the interworkings of this poem.
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Oooo... envy... it is a torturous master indeed!!
Love it!
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Thank you so very much for the lovely award and for the very inspiring quickie
Always a pleasure to enter one of your contests!!
Linda
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