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Gone...

Missing image
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Away from reality
No longer in touch
With life

Author notes

Use 10 words

In a list

A contest entry

Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
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Comments


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 18

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    Good write here

    Turn it around honey dont dwell on the feelings at hand and pick yourself up and get back into the world .For you are precious to so many and often you cant see this when closed off but I know you are loved by many you just have to let them in give them the ability to show you .

  • OurxBeginning
    May 17

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    Nice piece. It's deep and to the point. Your notes are very true. I liked the uniquness of this, well done and good luck.

  • catie052 gold member
    May 17

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    wow..this was a different take on this...I didn't think of it in any negative way...but I enjoy that you lead me in a different direction from what i percieved. Great take! and i also have to comment on the way you wrote this...it almost looks exactly like an arrow pointing down! (like its falling down, almost like your stressing the point) neat! good luck in the contest!