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Away from reality
No longer in touch
With life
Author notes
Use 10 words
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Picture Prompt by Catie Sheeran.
450 points, ended May 18, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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Good write here
Turn it around honey dont dwell on the feelings at hand and pick yourself up and get back into the world .For you are precious to so many and often you cant see this when closed off but I know you are loved by many you just have to let them in give them the ability to show you .
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Nice piece. It's deep and to the point. Your notes are very true. I liked the uniquness of this, well done and good luck.
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wow..this was a different take on this...I didn't think of it in any negative way...but I enjoy that you lead me in a different direction from what i percieved. Great take! and i also have to comment on the way you wrote this...it almost looks exactly like an arrow pointing down! (like its falling down, almost like your stressing the point) neat!
good luck in the contest!
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