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Flowers Dance

Missing image
Lilacs' coat shimmers
across petals masquerade
whispering existence.

Author notes

haiku
5-7-5
prompt is flower
pic credit:By Juli's pix on Flickr

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Your poem is exquisite, good choice of words and imagery. The picture is a fit compliment to your words. Well Done! Congrats on the gold trophy!

    Dennis

  • GreySquirrel
    May 18, 2008
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    Brilliant


  • Swan song gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    Whispering existance that was an excellent line


  • Weltt
    May 18, 2008

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    Awww I loved this!! I was going to write for this but words eluded me. best wishes in the contest!!!


  • crimsondew
    May 18, 2008
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    ccuute...lovely haiku..like it ...all the best!


  • sheltered
    May 18, 2008
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    "whispering existence" Love that.

  • OurxBeginning
    May 17, 2008

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    A very beautiful piece. The picture fits nicely with your words. I love nature and you certainly did it justice. Nice job and good luck in your contest.

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