A Magical Love

It's I your prince
under a witches spell

I have searched an eternity
for my beautiful Daniele

My love is unconditional
it has stood the test of time

There are no mountains to steep
for you I would not climb

Look past the dragon
search deep within my eyes
Can't you see my heart
look past this disguise

Just one kiss my angel
to break this evil deed
Look beyond the monster
this of you I plead

Our hearts will beat as one
forever eternally

Author notes

artwork by Susan McKivergan, I hope this is alright, I don't use puntuation if you can't accept it then please delete my poem.

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A contest entry

85 WORD PICTURE PROMPT 11 - SIXTEEN ENTRIES by ShelleyA. 600 points, ended May 18, 10 entries
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Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel. 550 points, ended June 3, 104 entries
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LadyDementia
June 22

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Congrats on the gold!
Aww you have penned a beautiful tale with your words. I love what you saw in this picture, a fantastic read. Congrats on the gold and good luck in your contest
DawnKestrel
May 28

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I really like the rhyme...
Good luck in my contest!
libithina
May 27

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Oh Theresa I sooo loved this .. the magical image. Loved it .. Oohhh 'it's I your prince'
and such words!!
'look past the dragon'
'this disguise'
'just one kiss'
Not a monster but gold
Most richly deserved Gold s accolades

my lovely sister 'hearts' that 'beat as one' s
moonbumps
May 18

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Well deserved Gold-great write babes-you should be proud!
xxx Hilly xxx
- tawk
  May 18
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  Thanks I had so much fun writing it
ShelleyA
May 18

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A beautiful write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Heartfelt and magical. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Very good meter and descriptives. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.
- tawk
  May 18
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  Wow thanks for the Gold this poem just flowed from my heart and I wrote it down. I am glad you liked it Thanks for hosting such a wonderful contest Again thank you Theresa