sweet lotus blossom
fills the air with fragrant scent
my love approaches
Author notes
Haiku 5-7-5
A contest entry
- PERFECT FLOWER HAIKU by Swan song.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Now that is Haiku beauty
Nice job here.
Riftkin
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Beautiful this was a lovely write a nice full sized haiku that worked well I feel
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I agree, this is very beautiful. I liked the end line the most. Short and to the point, well done and good luck.
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awww this is abs beautiful
lovely job and good luck
stephanie
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Beautiful haiku!All the best!
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