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Untitled Yet Again

I prepared myself
for a battle
I have already lost.

I continue
to fight
fate.

You are
the competitor,
the one fear

I must conquer,
my only need
for survival,

love.

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  • Perfection Pills
    June 12, 2008
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    i loved this piece it was deep and touching and beautiful very nice


  • Xmjx
    May 31, 2008

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    what a truly deep and touching piece I know I dont no you well but this poem makes me want to throw my arms around you and tell you I am here