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at long last

with smile released
hands are free
to loose the doves
and her eyes reveal
the epiphany

is it broken?

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  • Shadow of a Crow
    May 20
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    This is really cool. As always the last line is that final stroke of brilliance that makes all the other lines fall into a poetic uniform place. This is striking. While I get the tug that it might be dark...I also get the dark that it might be happy...kind of a yin and yang effect. Very awesome.