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Feel the rhythm

Well choreographed ballet shoes,
attuned to symphony of life,
graceful toes
never intrepid,
even to tap on cracks on love,
for heart beneath tutu
will succeed.

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    Very good congratulation on bronze.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Great imagery in this!! What strength this shows... to never be intrepid but to pursue love with heart!! Great message and excellent take on the prompt!