after image, delicate accommodations linger
in portraits of glass slippers so brittle
that adjustments beyond afterglow seem frosted.
as brazen no longer, pools of pure crystal
turn to fissures of flawed ice, deeply injured.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt... bring your creativitiy..... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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<<< tried ballet once, but she's not dainty enough to pull it off - lol, should've tried out for the dude parts!
lovely imagery and tears found here - wonderful!
congrats on the hm
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We can only wear those glass slippers for so long before they will crack! Fascinating write that holds a lot of depth that I think I shall have to ponder on!! Excellent write, thanks
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As i said...it will be amazing. And i am right hehe. Love it very much, great imagery. Good luck!! xxx
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Good luck to you! =] I know whatever you come up with will be amazing as always x
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Aww thank you.
I have no idea what I will write. lol -
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Its such a great pic though!
xx
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