Standing in the lap of earth,
hearing her symphony,
I close my eyes,
relishing our love
that sprints a smile.
My soul feels complete
in reminiscences of Almighty's blessings,
unabashedly proud
for I can feel Him hear me.
Author notes
prompt- beautiful peace
In a list
A contest entry
- Beautiful Peace by VoltaicHypnosis.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yes and yes, God witnessing with us His beauty, this is a solid rendition of the prompt - good luck lol
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Thanks dear..glad you enjoyed it so much!
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I like your "lap of earth" her and "Almighty" Him and the love they both send you.
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Thanks a lot!
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beautifully written!
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Thanks a lot!
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Gorgeous!! Good luck
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