Beautiful Swan, full of grace
a long, flowing white skirt
of fine and delicate lace
drifting through the waters
of peace and serenity
bowing your sweet head
to the reflections of eternity
A gentle breeze blows about you
in all of its mystery and love
bringing colored leaves of Autumn
fluttering down like gentle doves
and where you blissfully float
the water ripples so softly
and Willow Trees on both sides
bow to you in perfect harmony
Author notes
Picture #2
A contest entry
- GROUP CONTEST FOR THE PEOPLE WITH DISABILITES GROUP by Jeremy0826.
1600 points, ended June 7, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful
My dear friend, you have penned here such a beautiful write.While reading your words, I felt so peaceful, I felt like that swan,floating on the waters of peace and serenity.I loved the whole poem, and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Sending you many beautiful blessings of love and happiness,
Your friend in poetry,
~Angel~
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Mere words can't espress how amazing and beautiful your poem is! I love the picture too. Brought such a sense of peace too me while reading. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest Theresa
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This is such a beautiful piece
that you have written here. I
love this picture that you have
found. Swans are such lovely
and peaceful animals to look at.
Great work with your imagery and
descriptions here! Thanks a lot
for taking the time to enter this
contest. I appreciate it and wish
you the best of luck with it in my
contest! Keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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I think Swans are pretty, and you did the photo justice. I could really imagine it all. Nice job and keep it up.
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