Softly flowing,
silken waters -
caressing the soft face,
gliding upon rock
spectators of vivid
emerald leaves
bow in awe
of the alluring
beauty of crystalline
foaming waters -
of her falls.
Author notes
Prompt:
30 words of beauty... I think they are beautiful =]
~Enjoy...
In a list
A contest entry
- Beautiful Peace by x--nocturnia--x.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest here.
Comments
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Very beautiful and full of imagery I would of giving you gold.
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Hello Perception. You have penned a very detailed peice in such few words. Good luck in the contest. Regards.
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I found this to be very serene, and deff relaxing. Waterfalls are a pretty sight to see. Nice bg as well. Good luck in your contest.
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Beautiful indeed...great imagery..all the best!
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This IS beautiful!! Fantastic work! Well done, and best of luck to you.
I feel proud, now I can leave whilst feeling all uplifted! --beams-- are you applying a background? -
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Hehe... I'm not so good at backgrounds --
But, I try
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