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Muddy Water

I stand
in the middle
of a muddy puddle
dirty water fill my shoes

Grounded

the shallow swamp
grips tightly to my ankles
and I am left with no shelter

 

I look up at the horizon
endless charcoal clouds roar
as my toes shrivel
I wait....

frivolous
it may seem
I will never
get this time back

The clock runs so fast
I feel the rush in my hair
and listen, unwillingly
to it's taunting, unceasing ticks

I cannot deny

my patients weighing down

matting my hair to my hot face

as I watch others travel pass me with their umbrellas

 

I've waited so long

for the sun to dry up this muck
so I can be released
and continue my journey of life

 

Only to realize

I must find my own protection

to the endless storm

and walk against it

to get what I want

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  • Your poem here was quit the delight to read
    I really liked the imagery in this piece
    You have painted a wonderful image in the mind.
    Thanks for entering and best of wishes to you

    Tony

  • I love the visual of someone stuck in the mud with a single rain cloud hanging overhead, stuck there for days on end.Its sort of sad and amusing all at once. Not amusing like funny haha.... more of just an entertaining idea. and yes, if you want something, you have to move!!! Another great write from you!!!

    • catie052 gold member
      May 17
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      hey thanks ...Im just now realizing that i have to move...lol. terrible, I thought i would be smarter than that. Ive been kinda sittin here waiting for things to just happen and its not working. The last stanza is not exactly how i want it to be...so i'll work on it later. but for now it gets the point across...thanx for the comment.