upon life, frozen,
a swan glides--
with subtle grace,
to press a pointe
upon its stillness,
fracturing--
eye's limitations of beauty,
with the perfection--
of each movement...
Author notes
http://intano.deviantart.com/art/SwaN-84791778
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt... bring your creativitiy..... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Upgrade Your Green Trophy by Nicada.
850 points, ended August 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A beautiful take on the picture prompt. You have used some amazing imagery here. Thanks for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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well done
Flows well. Creates a beautiful image and an interesting point.
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Ahh we should all see beyond the limitations of beauty... this is a very deep piece with lovely imagery. Thanks
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Going to just 'sigh and leave quietly
Love, C
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Interesting piece. I liked the imagery within this. It goes well with the photo, well done.
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sometimes we feel we are frozen in time, but there is always something or someone to warm our hearts. Thank you for penning your words. Juls
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