In a pool of others
dreams;
her thoughts as the
electricity between,
a surreal illusion
and the reality she's seen
dance for individuality
supreme
Author notes
Artist credit:
http://intano.deviantart.com/art/SwaN-84791778
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt... bring your creativitiy..... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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congrats on the gold and I love the graphic; great take on it too. I'm glad this was featured and I hope everyone that clicks, comments.
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this is beautiful...
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A short piece but it captures the prompt in a very different and creative way. Great title and interesting interpretation.
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Very quick, clear image, that leave the reader with desire for more. Lovely alliteration with s sound. Gold trophy well deserved.
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Congrats on gold!
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I absolutely LOVE this one. This is my new fave. of yours. The write was so beautiful with the language you chose to use, your deep imagery and metaphor..
Everything came together so well and you ended it perfectly with " dance for individuality supreme"
Congrats on gold!!!
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I can definitely relate to this piece!! Trying to find one's individuality and not dance to others dream! An excellent take on the pic, thanks!
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Tight diction, tied together for greater effect. Interesting formatting, with the italics at the end and the indent higher up. Glad I had a chance to read this.
Good luck on the contest!
Nocturne -
Confidence and power of ones will...excellent interpretation...all the best!
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