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Soft As Ice

Each step I take is predetermined,

so no ice breaking reality for me. 

I am that crack underneath your footsteps,

yet remain your sanctuary and retreat. 

 

 

 

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Congratulations not only on the shiny, but a brilliant write!! You have made an incredible metaphor here. This is short but is very powerful. Well done my darlin!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Fascinating!! To be the crack under someone's footstep but also their sanctuary!! I live a similar reality predetermined. Excellent take. Thanks!