Two reflections
One frozen and cold
The other the perfect picture of love and beauty
Two people in one
One the epitome of all that's evil
The other...me
Author notes
Meh
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt... bring your creativitiy..... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent, I had a look at the picture prompt and your poem is a wonderful description of it. I like poems that I can understand what you the writer is trying to say, some poems use so many fancy words that they lose their meaning all together.
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Excellent take!! Very creative, seeing the picture as a metaphor for us all having two different sides... and the love and beauty being the one that we try to own more strongly.
Loved that last line!!
Thanks
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I think this is creative, as the title states that it wants. Short but to the point, enjoyed the imagery, nice work!!
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