My soul is fragile,
like a ballerina's dance.
One little slip up,
and I may start to crack.
So please be careful,
bring love which doesn't lack...
...I beg you.
Author notes
30 Words
Picture Prompt - Credit Artist:
http://intano.deviantart.com/art/SwaN-84791778
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt... bring your creativitiy..... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Exactly!! I think our souls are fragile (my fav word) and the metaphor to a dancer slipping is great!! Love that second to last line... if only we could find that!
Thanks
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Interesting take on the prompt, it's very true for some people. Short and to the point, well done.
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Like it!
bring love which doesn't lack...
powerful line...very well done..all the best!
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Yes we are all fragile and you have depicted this here. Beautiful descriptions and best of luck in the contest.
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loved this poem it was short, sweet and simple. not twenty pages long. i'm a busy person so i need short things here and there, but they still have to be good.
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