Singing through the fiery skies,
Night comes soon I open my eyes
Softly I wake from deepest sleep
The price of my life is exceedingly steep
I'll be out for hours till dawn comes my way
I must never see the break of day.
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Oh say can you see how the night is so free
How the night is so nice how the night can entice
Oh how can we say that the best time is day
When the night is so right for a flight!
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Silent in the night, though the night sings its own song
I walk through the dark for it's where I belong
Will you come join me, I promise you this
You shall be most safe from the Vampire's Kiss
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I am the phantom in your mind,
I am most definitely one of a kind.
I am the one that makes your knees weak,
I am the one about whom others speak.
Come with me I will open your eyes,
I'll show you what life is like on the Dark Side.
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Author notes
A series of short poems I came up with while sending items to people anonymously on a facebook application I frequent. Enjoy.
Comments
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hmm quirky and fun to read, although In my opinion i felt that the rhyme scheme was a bit off, they don't flow too smoothly and it seems that these are made to be read aloud, like most rhyme. When i came to the end of more than a few of the lines my head kinda skipped a beat to keep the rhythm flowing.
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Of all your poems here I liked the third one best. Of course in the second verse use it is instead of it's. Contractions make poems weak. I try and stay away from them. All these poems are dark and somewhat inviting. Keep writing when you can and read , read, read. Find a poet you like. The more you read of that poet the bette ryou will become. Take care, Papagallo
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