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Teenage life

The thirteenth year of life
I guess it was okay
Now to much pain nor strife
Just living through the day

Now at age fourteen
Life was great
Living up peachy keen
I even had my first date

Fifteen years old
And the misery begins
I watched the pain unfold
With the realization that nobody wins

Sixteen now
And full of cuts
My mother said wow
Your fucking nuts

The seventeenth year
You came into my life
Just to know you were here
Made me put down the knife

Eighteen has finally come
And I'm ready to be free
To guzzle down the rum
And learn how to be me

Nineteen is here
Full of rage
The end is near
Just a turn of the page

Teenage life
And this is it
Hormones and strife
Just not giving a shit

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  • DAMSELx
    July 5
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    Simply stated but true to life. I believe my "misery" began at age 15 as well.

    Some grammar corrections:
    Line 3: "Now to much pain nor strife"
    -->Possibly "Not too much pain nor strife"?
    Line 16: "Your fucking nuts"
    -->"You're fucking nuts"

    --DAMSELx
  • Being 17 right now, I can say that you basically hit the nail on the head. Not saying every teen drinks and cutss, but every teen fucks up a little, teenage years are about making mistakes.

  • I Am Gun
    May 28

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    this was gorgeous.
    I love the way it flows you had me from the first stanza...great job and keep writing

  • Mrs. Seige
    May 27
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    Sych a great poem. Loved it, the stages of life are all diffrent and it was great to see this.

  • DeSiBoO14
    May 20

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    I lYkD dIs AlOt!!iM 14 n YeA i Do ThInGs WiT oUt GiViN a ShYt All Da TiMe!!GrEat WrItE!!cHeCk OuT sUm Of My PoEmS!!...

  • You did an exellent job on your poem
    I really like the rhyme and rhythm
    Splendidly done indeed.
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • EmoAngel13
    May 19
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    WOW

    i like it
    i turned 13 5 months ago

  • This is really good.
    I really like it!
    I turn 14 tomorrow!)

    • Happy Birthday!!!! My birthday was Today also! I'm glad you liked my poem and I hope you had a great birthday!
  • sht man...this is actually good!lol na I liked it nice work
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