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Fishing In The Kitchen Sink

What is love?
I can't really say
I know that I feel it
Each and everyday

Love for my friends
My family too
Deep down inside
Is my love for you

Uncontrollable Urges
That I can't seem to stop
Every time I see you
I feel like I'm going to pop

Is this really love?
Or are you putting on a show?
The answer to your question is
I really just don't know

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  • SmartBrick
    June 13, 2008

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    Wow!Do you think this is horrible?I didn't think so!I think you're putting yourself down!Anyway thanks for entering!


  • grapefruite
    May 26, 2008
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    I agree with the last stanza. Good job.