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Far Away

If you scream in the night,
No matter what I do,
I know that only in my heart,
Could I even hear you.

If you cry in the morning,
So worked full of fear,
No matter what I do,
I know I cannot hear.

If you are hurt in the day,
And you need me there too,
I cannot be there,
Yet my love is still true.

If you were to die in the evening,
The next day I’d be bleeding,
Cause our love is strong,
No matter the meaning.

If you are laid to rest,
On a warm summers day,
You know I would be screaming.
The words I need to say,

And those words we know,
And all of them true,
Three little words…
I’m screaming “I love you.”

Author notes

Option 4... Nickelback Title

By the way... the thoughts were about me and Lili... half a world apart and the love is still strong. Love is love... but... I do fear for her safety... knowing I can't be there.

Oh... and by the next day... I meant cause the time difference.

Anyway... enjoy...

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Comments


  • Captain Jenny
    October 26, 2008
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    Beautiful. Every word holds so much emotion. You write such wonderful poems...

    ~love lae


  • Androgyneric
    May 21, 2008

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    Oh my....thank you so much.. this is simply beautiful..

    Thank you...


  • mystic-angel gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    This is great. Good flow throughout and a perfect take on the title. Well written. Thanks for your entry. Good luck!